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School Trip

Dave x Reader

[Name] POV

…He kisses you… DAVE STRIDER kisses YOU! The feel of his lips lightly pressing on yours make your face flush red. It wasn’t a greedy or lustful kiss, it was filled with emotion of the highest verity. Slowly, you begin to kiss back, a magical array of feelings enfold you both as the kiss goes on. Air couldn’t be avoided though, and with dismay you break the kiss. Dave’s signature poker face seemed to have melted into a soft smile, and you return it. “You got me Strider,” you laugh out “that was better than apple juice.” His grin only widens as he leans in for another kiss. Throwing his arms around your waist and hoisting you onto his lap, you drape you arms over his shoulders. He breaks the kiss and brings his lips to your ear, “I really like you [Name], I don’t know how, but you made me fall in love with you in only two days.” He whispers softly. “That has to be some sort of record.” You chuckle back. He laughed, it was a nice sweet laugh, that made your cheeks that more red. You both sat there, wrapped in each other’s arms, the sound of the movie softly playing in the background. Staring at him face to face and with a flirty grin you say “We have two options, one continue watching the movie, or two, continue this little make out session, your pick.” Dave slowly grabs the remote and presses the power button, never looking away from you, then he leans in again and places his lips back on yours.

Five minutes passed of you and him, exchanging sweet nothings and passionate kisses. The world seemed to blank out, it was only you and Dave. In fact you both were so entranced that you hadn’t noticed when the elder Strider had walked in. Slowly he cleared his throat and you realized his presence. “So, are you guys gonna have sex or?”

Dave POV

Oh God your brother! You could feel your face explode. “BRO. WHAT. THE. FUCK!!!” you shout at him. He gives you an evil grin, “Just wanted to make sure you used protection.” Why was he so embarrassing! GOD! You let go of [Name] and stare your brother right in the face “Get out.” You exclaim as you begin to push him out of the room. “Alright then, call me if you need anything, water, food, condoms.” ”B-BRO, STOP!” you yell at him. “Even if it did happen I wouldn’t do it in a crapy run down hotel!” You say as you shove him out the door. ”Oh I get it,” Bro whispers in you ear “just tell me if you need some private time at home, ok?” And with that comment you slammed the door on his face. Why did he have to constantly embarrass you like that! It was even worse knowing that it happened right in front of your new girlfriend. [Name]…your girlfriend…. Huh… you liked the sound of it. You slowly make your way back to the bed to see [Name] Curled up and laughing her ass off. “What’s so funny?” you asked. “Y-your brother is so fucking weird!” she gasps out. “Weird and annoying are very closely related” you scoff out. Holding her once again you start up the kiss that your brother so rudely interrupted.

[Name] POV

The rest of the trip was spent by his side, and you couldn’t feel happier. You weren’t one of those couples that flaunted the fact that they were now together, but it didn’t stop most of your female classmates from glaring at you when he did show you affection. Their opinions didn’t matter in the slightest, and the ones that did were that of your friends, like Jade and Rose who at discovering your relationship congratulated you. It was really your first relationship and it meant a lot knowing that they approved of it.

Everything about Dave seemed to make you smile, his ironic humor, his inability to feel embarrassed in public, and his surprising love for history. Although Dave didn’t seem like it, he loved history. Something in him lit up when he spoke about it, as if he was an expert on time. You had all gone to the museum and you swear you have never seen him more interested in a school subject. You learned a lot from him as he took you through the museum, hand wrapped around your waist, and showed you many of his favorite exhibits. Life seemed perfect as you heard him trail on about every detail of Amelia Earhart’s journey, and you knew that this relationship was one that would last.
This is where I originally wanted to end off the series, but since I like you guys I may consider an extended ending with say, a lemon? *seductively wiggles eyebrows*

Part 6: [link]

Extended ending: [link] (NSFW)
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homestucklov35 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Omg I get it expert on time and daves the light of time
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homestucklov35 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
I read part 8 I hD a nosebleed so bad
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homestucklov35 Featured By Owner 3 days ago  New member Hobbyist General Artist
Bro is weird
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TheNerdTaku Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2015  New member Student General Artist
The extra link's no t working! :(
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DemonicAngelface Featured By Owner 6 days ago  New member
That happened to me too ;-;
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lunaflyaway Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2014
Gotta love Dirk. Second time reading this and it never gets old.
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LuckRose Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2014
Hey, can I have the lemon noted to me?
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TheFrenchiestOfFries Featured By Owner Dec 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This was an awesome reader insert :D I like how you wrote it so they weren't in love right away, like most reader inserts. It's much nicer to see how and why the reader and Dave fell in love rather than it being established in the first place, and not the typical cliche where they've always been in love with one another but were too afraid to say anything. ^^ Good job, hun :heart: 
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meowkatie Featured By Owner Nov 28, 2014
Expert of t-
EEeeeyyyyyyyy~
I see what you did there.....>:3
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thatcatlover20 Featured By Owner Sep 17, 2014
I see what you did there with expert of time
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HawkfireWindows Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2014   General Artist
As if he was an expert on time.
I see what you did there.
ewe
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TehNinjaKitteh Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
QWQ Sad to see it end, but this is one if the bests fanfics I've seen!
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PokePowerGirl100 Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Send me the ending? OuO
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onlyfortime Featured By Owner Sep 5, 2014  Student General Artist
I truly wish I could but I fear I no longer have it in my possession
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PokePowerGirl100 Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Aww... 
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Iluvkarkitty Featured By Owner Jul 29, 2014
when this chapter started I was thinking please have bro walk in and then he said so you guys gonna have sex or? I was internnally screaming so hard and craking up out loud like really bro? REALLY???
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shieldedColors Featured By Owner Jul 24, 2014  Student Writer
1)  “Alright then, call me if you need anything, water, food, condoms.” ”B-BRO, STOP!”

You made me laugh...(andmaybevensnortafewtimes)

2) " Something in him lit up when he spoke about it, as if he was an expert on time. "

( e we ) I see what you did there.

3) I absolutely adored this story and the POV changes were well placed if you were to ask me.

~ shieldedColors ~  ( =^v^= )
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Suweida Featured By Owner Jun 29, 2014
Could you please send me the link to the ending?
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Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
OH I WANT THT EXTENSION
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Cocoismynumber1food Featured By Owner Jun 25, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I frunkin luv Dirk so much god
M y stomach
Hurts
Gina watch
Read forever
Your
A
Writing
GENIUS
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ScaryMary95 Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Story was amazing! Can you pweese send me the link to the extended ending? :)
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1JashinWorshiper Featured By Owner Jun 24, 2014  Student General Artist
Could you please note me the extended ending? .w.
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StormClanAnime Featured By Owner Jun 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
"Just let me know if you need anything. Food, water. .. condoms. " xD hilarious
Can u send me the extended ending?
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makaalbarn7 Featured By Owner Jun 15, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
could I get a link to the extended ending the link doesn't work 
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CorporalBadass Featured By Owner Jun 14, 2014
Could you link me the extended ending please? Thank you! I really loved this story! Nepeta Heart 
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lovesenatorlemonsnou Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014
I need dis ending
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robitDragon Featured By Owner Jun 1, 2014  Student General Artist
"Aaaaaannnd thats how i met your mother!" Dave exclaimed to his children
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Jeffthekillerluver Featured By Owner May 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Can you note me the extended ending pls
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fanficlover2334 Featured By Owner May 12, 2014
I know you've gotten this a lot, but can you send the extended ending? Pwease?
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serendipitousBrownie Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
EEEEAAAAKKK THIS STORY IS SUPER AMAZING :D umm..but i cant seem to open the extended ending part, devART says it doesnt exist cud u pls send me the link? hope you keep on making more amazing fics!!!
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killermisao Featured By Owner Apr 18, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
can you send me the extended ending?
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caseyXtheXcat Featured By Owner Apr 12, 2014
OmO
You just gotta send me that extended ending bro...
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Takura85034 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2014
I know you probably get asked this a lot for this story
but...
could you send me the extended ending?
If it's not to much trouble......
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Ectobiologist413 Featured By Owner Mar 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Could you note me the extended ending ?
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KestrelzKestrel Featured By Owner Mar 20, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Can  you note me the extended ending plez?
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mindroid Featured By Owner Mar 17, 2014  Student Writer
ugh so sugoi. You truly have a wonderful talent at writing.
keep doing what you do best in.
In this case that's writing.Hug 
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lola1259 Featured By Owner Mar 16, 2014
may u note me the extended ending :happybounce:
great story~Heart 
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snakercow Featured By Owner Mar 15, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
srry to be a bother, if i am. Im enraptured in this story, and it would be simply fantastic if you could note me the extended ending.
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watermelonkoala Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2014  Student General Artist
Pffft. *^* Note me the Extended Ending, pleaseee. :iconmoeblushplz:
Great story. :icongoodjob-plz:
Very much wow. :iconotakuingplz:
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Devilheart101 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Excuse me, I really loved your fanfic ouo Can ya send the extended ending please?
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ThatGirlNamedKali Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Oops, I meant read. Sorry!
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ThatGirlNamedKali Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
This was such an awesome reader insert! I loved reading it! The extended ending is really cool too. I'm glad you wrote it. I also red your Gamzee x Reader lemon that you put on fanfiction.net. It's awesome too. Keep writing, you're really good at it! :3
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ENZOBUTT Featured By Owner Feb 20, 2014
I know a lot of people are asking but could you please note me the extended ending? If it's not too much trouble dear ;v;
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IGame101 Featured By Owner Feb 17, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
omfg dirk




every time xD
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kendiwolf Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
'as if he were an expert on time' ahahahaha I see what you did there! lolz (idunno how to do the faces, i'm a noob but if I did know it would be that look you get when your friend starts talking to her crush[where the fuck am I going with this?!?] uhm.... nevermind) <-----#Mentalbreakdown
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FuzzyAlly Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I know you get a lot of requests for this, but could you note me the extended ending?
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Shannon24089 Featured By Owner Feb 14, 2014
Can you please note me the extended ending?
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Kalidrawer123 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Digital Artist
May you please note me the extended ending.
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AzureFlame805 Featured By Owner Feb 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
I would love you forever if you sent me a note of the extended ending! I swear, EVERS AND EVERS AND EVERS.
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JessicaGoldsword Featured By Owner Feb 2, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
It's funny because I just learned about Amelia Earhart last week
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